Still wasn't happy with the lettering composition, so...

Here's another go...

invite with amends

Just to recap.. Amends were

1. Dancing couple - with empire fit dress for bride (long at back but able to see shoes/feet) and shrug, groom wearing normal dress suit.
2. Add sketchy texture where poss but esp the Bride's dress and tree
3. add initialed heart to tree (**i've gone for one initial each but can easily change it to two if you prefer)
4. Add two cats to the scene (one in tree if poss)
5. Add a guitar (subtle but it's deffo there ;) can make more obvious if you'd prefer)
6. Add text sent via email - i've kept this to the layout on the PDF - happy (probs needs) to be realigned

Hope this is ok - let me know and I'll send through as a pdf and also pull together the accommodation sheet using the border and some motifs - let me know which ones you like best (ie a cat/the embelton hall stone/the carved/love heart/etc)

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